URGING THE DEPARTMENT OF TRANSPORTATION, DEPARTMENT OF EDUCATION, AND CITY AND COUNTY OF HONOLULU TO ENSURE THE SAFETY OF MILILANI ʻIKE ELEMENTARY STUDENTS USING SCHOOL CROSSWALKS.
What changed between versions
All operative RESOLVED clauses changed from 'should be implemented/constructed/installed/outfitted' to 'is requested to be implemented/constructed/installed/outfitted,' softening the resolution's tone from a recommendation to a request directed at the agencies.
Added the word 'that' before the urged actions in the first two RESOLVED clauses for grammatical clarity (e.g., 'the Senate concurring, that the Department of Transportation... are urged').
Expanded 'U.S. Department of Transportation' to 'United States Department of Transportation' and changed 'per cent' to 'percent' in the WHEREAS clauses.
Added a comma after 'in Hawaii' in the pedestrian fatalities WHEREAS clause for readability.
The 'OFFERED BY' signature block at the end of the resolution was removed, consistent with the House Draft 1 template format.